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Roses and Thorns

Deepanjana Mondal

 

It was fascinating to walk in the moonlight.  Nisha was enchanted by the ethereal beauty of the hills and the garden. The roses were in full bloom; their color exotic even in the silvery light; their shapes perfect; and their heady perfume intoxicating. The roses were Asha’s passion.

Suddenly it became dark and very cloudy and Nisha turned to the house. But the house seemed deserted. Nisha called her sister, “Asha” but there was no answer, except her voice echoing in the big house, Asha, Asha, Asha.... The silence was menacing. Nisha heard her own heart beat and footsteps as she began to look from one room to another.

She was frightened of the once well-loved house.

Outside the rain started slashing and pouring heavily.  Somewhere a window was slamming. Nisha dashed there. It was Asha’s bedroom. Asha was lying on the bed. She had a mutinous look. Her lips were parted attempting at a smile but was ghastly; for she was dead and stark. Her big dark eyes were open and looked bigger. It was sinister to see her sister’s exulted, dead eyes. Nisha tried to close them, but they would not close.

Suddenly she saw the two men standing on the doorstep. They looked at her accusingly, “You killed her.” Their voices echoed in the big house, “killed her, killed her….” “No, no, she was my life.” Said Nisha in a small quivering voice, but could not move her body as it had become lead. They were coming near her. Their bodies seemed to emanate a deathly cold and she was terrified.

She tried to run through them but tripped over and fell face down. She felt their cold breaths and fingers on her throat.

“No….”

 

“Nisha…Nisha…” someone was gently shaking her. Nisha gradually opened her eyes. The housekeeper’s kind face smiled at her. She said in a kind voice, “You had a nightmare. Would you like me to stay here for the rest of the night?” Nisha declined. A few minutes later she was alone again. She looked at the sprawling garden through the wide windows. The sky was tinged with little red specks. Nisha knew she could not sleep anymore. Slowly and painfully she got into her wheelchair and turned to her desk. Nisha took her sister’s diary and read.

On the opening page she read the inscription: To my beloved Asha, for those precious moments and for remembrance; with love Ravi.

The diary was three-fourth filled with Asha’s neat handwriting, documenting her short spells of happiness. Nisha had been reading excerpts from the diary since the past two months.

 

Saturday, 1st January

Dear Diary,

“Where have you been all these years?” Ravi asks me. I can ask the same of him. Today he gave me this beautiful companion and all I can think of is Ravi. I am brimming with love and happiness.

 

Monday, 10th January

Dear Diary,

It is raining and I am so happy.

Love is a drug; love is potent.

Love is heady; love is true.

Love is lovely as a dream come true.

She gives me such severe looks;

As if to state that love is all thorns, not roses,

But I say that love is roses with thorns.

 

Sunday, 6th February

Dear Diary,

I feel like a teenager and not the twenty-three year old woman. Oh, Nisha if only you could find someone like Ravi. He said, “You are intoxicating like the roses.” I say that you have made me drunk and intoxicated with love.

 

Thursday, 25th August

Dear Diary,

Nisha is making me nervous and guilty. I am being so selfish in feeling happiness when she is so desolate and unhappy. But I am not leaving her forever. We would be neighbors, almost.

 It’s my turn to look after her and Ravi will help me. I think that the doctor friend of Ravi’s will be suitable for her.

 

Friday, 28th October

Dear Diary,

It is the end for me. I will never be a bride again, nor will I love again. I still can not believe that Ravi is dead. Why did I let them go without me? Why did I not die instead?

 

Nisha closed the diary with a little jerk and looked outside for a while. The birds were getting busy and the sky was liquid gold. But Nisha did not see anything.

She remembered the accident so well. She had been visiting Asha in her new house. Ravi was driving Nisha to her house. She had insisted Asha to stay back and she had stayed back. It was a rainy afternoon and the hills were slippery. “Yes, I remember it so well. Ravi lost his life and I paid with my legs.”  

She opened the diary again and read the neat handwriting.

 

Saturday, 4th April

Dear Diary,

It has been more than nine years since I felt so fresh and happy. I cannot believe that I am writing in my favorite diary again.

Today, I met him again. I feel so tranquil and sentient in his company. I like his eyes. Even hours after he left I can see his lovely eyes. I never thought it possible; but I think I am falling in love again.

 

Wednesday, 29th April

Dear Diary,

Is it not strange, that I can look at these hills again, without pain and guilt. The hills are so beautiful. In his company, today it seemed more so. He had no more classes and we met at the café. I never realize the time when I am with him. We were together for four hours!

 Nisha was so angry and sad because I was late. And I should be sad too, for I lied to Nisha. But I am not.  

I am being selfish and hate myself for saying that sometimes she stifles me with her love and concern. Sometimes I feel like defying her and shaking her confidence of owning me.

But she does own me with her selfless love.

 

Friday, 15th May

Dear Diary,

Today he called to say that he wants to meet Nisha and Uncle Sen. I have not decided yet when I will invite him. I have to tell her about us.

Uncle Sen will like him but will Nisha?

 I guess he is right; I am a little afraid to tell Nisha about him. But she has to know.

 

Sunday, 31st May

Dear Diary,

How could she say that to me? Is she not happy to see me happier? She disapproves of my falling in love. Have I not punished myself enough for being alive, but I am alive. I feel like shouting “I am Alive.”

 

Sunday, 7th June

Dear Diary,

Today he came. Uncle Sen liked him and appreciates my choice. I hope so does Nisha. But she was so quiet. I hope she will come to terms with him, just as she had loved dear Ravi.

I love her so much and I hate to do anything that upsets or hurts her.

And I love him so much. I hope Nisha will understand and accept.

 

 

Nisha’s eyes were brimming. She closed the diary with a thud and looked at Asha’s photo. She was beautiful and charming. Her small oval face framed with curly hairs and big dark eyes was irresistible to everyone. She had a lovely smile. Slowly Nisha kissed the photo and held it very close to her heart. “Oh! Why did you have to fall in love?” hissed Nisha.

 

Mr. Sen was in his early seventies. He was Nisha’s father’s friend. He had been like their guardian since their parents’ death; at the time Nisha was fifteen and Asha was three years old. He often came to see them.

 “They tell me that you are not sleeping well, again.”

“No, nothing is wrong with me. I am quite well.”

“You should visit some place. Here it is too lonely and you are always reminded of…the past.”

“No Uncle, I do not need all these (she waved to include the garden, hills, and the house) to remind me of the past or Asha. Even if I go to the sea, she will be with me.”

“Maybe you have a point. Running away will not solve anything. They say that time is the best healer and it is not yet three months, since…”

“There is nothing to be solved. She did not think of anyone else, other than herself. I cannot forgive her; but I must.”

Mr. Sen and Nisha were sitting under the umbrella out in the garden. It was a lovely morning. The house was quite old and Nisha’s family had owned it for generations. She was rooted to the old house, its garden and the hills. It was a lonely house and she had always lived there.

He looked at Nisha with concern. Her pale face looked paler.  In the morning light, her head appeared more grey than black. Her small sharp eyes looked tired. She was looking older than her forty-six years. She had never been a beauty like her sister, but she had always looked healthy.

Nisha saw Uncle Sen scrutinizing her. She was feeling a little angry. She wanted to be alone. But looking at his kind, concerned eyes she controlled herself. She must be patient. “Patience, patience…” she was repeating in her mind over and over.

 

Nisha had a queer feeling of being followed. She knew that she was alone. She turned back, but the corridor was empty. It was just the wind, making the blinds rustle. She stopped in her track. The sound was very low, but she heard it distinctly. Yes, someone was walking towards her.

Asha came out of the bedroom. She was like a sleepwalker. “Asha, Asha…” Nisha called, but she did not stop or wake. She was walking out to the garden. “Asha, where are you going? Asha wake up.” Nisha was calling and walking behind her. “Asha…you will hurt yourself.” Asha almost floated to her bed of roses and stooped over the blossoming roses.    

 “Asha, why don’t you look at me?  Asha… can you hear?

Slowly Asha turned towards her.

The face was so horrible with the dead staring eyes; her look vacant, meaningless. “No… no….”Nisha screamed.

 

Nisha woke up with a start. Her clothes were almost wet from sweating. She switched on the light. On her bed side table Asha’s smiling photo was faced towards her. The smile was full of love and life. Nisha picked the photo and cried. She said painfully through her tears, “Why do you come to me with your dead face? Why do you torture me so? Have I not loved you and taken care of you? Do I not love you still?”

There was no answer; and there was no sleep or reassuring dream either for Nisha.

 

A few weeks later Nisha in her wheelchair was taking a stroll in the garden. It was full of roses in blossom. A tiny half-bud half-bloom rose attracted her. She tried to cut it with her fingers as she had no scissors with her. But the moment she touched the stem it pricked her. Instinctively she jerked her hand back and saw a tiny drop of blood on her finger. And Nisha had to wrench it.

At the house an envelope was waiting for her. It had come by the post from her lawyer with a brief statement that Asha had left the sealed envelope with him asking him to post it in spring.  

Inside the envelope there was a beautiful dead red rose with the letter.

 

 

My dearest sister,

This faded rose was once alive and beautiful. This is one of the many roses that bloom in our garden. This dead rose is for you, for remembrance. I know how much you enjoy the garden and we spent many happy hours in it.

You have always been very good to me. You were more of a mother than a sister. You have pampered me and cherished me. I was your darling. And I have loved you like a child loving its mother; with my soul and complete trust. Trust, do you know the meaning of the word- trust?

Why did you do it, Nisha? Yes I know about his accident, which was no accident, was it? I saw you putting the tablets in the coffee. And it was his cup. The last coffee he drank before he bid me goodnight, which was meant to be goodbye. I remember it so well. You told him to be careful of the road; it was drizzling.

Then I had not understood; I was dazed and confused. I could think nothing but that he too was dead; and my last chance at happiness gone forever. I kept thinking myself as some bad omen; unlucky for my loved ones.

It was another shock to me when they found it in the autopsy. I was perplexed that why such a practical, intelligent person would take sleeping pills before driving down the hill on a wet, slippery night. I could not believe it. It was impossible and very unlike him, and I knew him.

Then it all became clear to me. And I hated you. Hated you not only for what you did, but also for what you made me do to him, in death. I was disloyal to him when I lied in court. But; how could I betray my own blood; my own beloved sister. He was dead and I realized that telling the truth would not bring him back. I did my duty to you.

Before I end I must confess that this episode reminds me of another. Was that an accident too, or just meant to be an accident?

I am taking these pills, which will give me eternal sleep and perhaps exonerate me for my sins. And may you live long to remember.

 

Yours forever

Asha

Deepanjana Mondal

New York City

E-mail: deepanjana.mondal@gmail.com & sisir.mondal@gmail.com

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